How do you live with three weeks left
What do you do with no time
What do you say to your kids and husband
What do you do when your ready to die
How do you watch your kid cry
How do you watch your husband fall down and cry
How do you watch the precious time slip by
How do you remember those years
chorus
What do you do without time
You live to die waiting for death
Like a baby helpless in this world
you go pray to the one who loves you
Pray that your kids go to college
pray that your husband is all right
pray that your family can do without you
pray for more precious time
pray that mom can bury her kid
and pray that dad does all right
pray that on sunday, that you dont cry
pray that your cousins do fine
Chorus
And take comfort in knowing
that you were a blessing
Like an angel a rose among the thorns
you helped the world by showing them his love
Like an angel a rose among the thorns
you helped the world by showing them his love
his loveDo you like my song? (called Brenda's Song)?
wow. This is so good. I don't know the tune you're using but it does flow nicely as a song. The lyrics are so sad but also powerful too. Great job. PS: i wanted to cry in some parts but the ending is somewhat positive. keep writing. Love Julia.Do you like my song? (called Brenda's Song)?
Better than most pop song lyrics, I must say. If I have any criticism, it's that it's a little too sad, and personally I wouldn't like it, I find melancholy a much more beautiful emotion, but the public like this sort of thing, so you'll do fine.
It's great. True emotions and a lot of people can relate to such a song. I love how you ask questions and then you write the actions of what you do even though you have those questions.
excellent job!
Wow. A lot of the lyrics of songs I've read before can't match up to yours when it comes to quality. This is excellent. God's definitely given you talent in this area.
So, to answer your question...yes, I do!
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